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Offline Dreylek

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Dreylek Application
« on: July 29, 2012, 02:30 PM »
1. Character Name - Dreylek, Anubys ( for Empire )

2. Why you wish to join the Jedi Order - First of all, im great Star Wars fan and i love RP, i playrd KOTOR1/2, and want to try again reconnect with the Light Side of the Force, and help others.

3. Time Zone - GMT +1

4. Your Class (and advanced class if applicable) - Jedi Guardian

5. Short roleplaying biography of your character (please try not to use the quest storyline of TOR) -  Dreylek Darkkiller was born on the Alderaan. He showed Force Sensitivity and at young age and began training with the Elyzea Light.He has slight recollections of a brother who was a Sage who went off to join the Jedi when he was a child. His parents never told him what happened to him or his name and it became an awkward moment when he was brought up to discussion. Dreylek grew very strong in the force and became a power within the knights at a young age. His parents did not want him to join the Jedi in fear of the recent aggression of the Sith Empire and the deaths of many Jedi. After the sacking of Coruscant, Dreylek saw that the Sith threat was too large to be ignored. Against his family's wishes he left to join the Jedi. Although he was a young adult at the time the Jedi council accepted him and made him an Initiate because of his great knowledge of the Force. He was embarrassed going through lightsaber training with children, but he learned quickly and was able to begin missions with his master.

He became a Padawan learner under Elyzea Light. She was a Human and slightly shorter then Dreylek. She was a master swordsmen and was renowned for her knowledge on the history of the Republic. She was very patient and a strict follower of the Jedi Code and taught her's Padawans to be likewise. Dreylek flourished under Elyzea's Light instruction and grew in every aspect of being a Jedi. Elyzea Light became like a mother to him and Dreylek strove to be just like her. They were a perfect team, with Dreylek's strong affinity to the force and his Miraluka's abilities combined with Elyzea's Light strategic leadership and lightsaber mastery they were unbeatable.

Dreylek passed the trials and advanced to the rank of Knight after a few years under the leadership of Elyzea Light. Dreylek stayed with Elyzeas Light, but because of the deaths of so many Jedi Masters and the endless flow of Padawans Elyzeas Light took on another Padawan learner. Her name was Sedeysha Jo, a purple Twi'lek who was found as an orphan on one of the Outer Rim sieges. She was a very rambunctious and hot-headed, she never liked to stay still or listen to instruction. Dreylek never figured out how she was accepted into Jedi training but he did his best to be kind and courteous to the Sedeysha, but she always pushed his patience. Elyzea Light was never hard on her because of her disobedience, but remained ever calm and never stopped pushing the Jedi Code on her.

One day on a mission on Balmorra, they encountered a group of four Sith Infiltrators. To Dreylek's surprise they were pure-blood Sith and he sensed they were powerful in the force. Elyzea Light tried to approach them diplomatically but Sedeysha, eager to test her skills on the Sith, rushed into battle and engaged the Sith. Dreylek and Elyzea Light quickly joined her knowing that peace was no longer an option. The battle was intense but Dreylek, Elyzea Light, and Sedeysha never faced this powerful of an enemy. Sedeysha's lack of discipline proved to be her downfall for she was knocked unconscious in the fight. Elyzea Light and Dreylek were able to slay three Sith but the one who remained was obviously a Sith Lord from his pure strength and power. Elyzea Light turned to Dreylek and told him to survive and attacked the Sith, before Dreylek could react the Sith Lord killed Elyzea Light. Dreylek cried in disbelief, the Sith then sent a bolt of Force Lightning towards Dreylek who was sent flying back. The Sith Lord, thinking Dreylek was dead went over to Sedeysha, picked up her still unconscious body and took her with him.

When Dreylek sensed the Sith Lord left he awakened and saw that he took Sedeysha. Dreylek wanted to go after her but remembered what Elyzea Light said and returned to Tython.
« Last Edit: August 07, 2012, 02:53 AM by Dreylek »

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Re: Dreylek Application
« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2012, 02:53 PM »
Greeting Dreylek, and welcome to our HoloNet.

I spoke to you in-game already, so you know the things I would normally say here.

I'd like to remind you that we agreed you need to expand your rp bio.

May the Force be with you, and good luck!

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Knight Scalarik
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Re: Dreylek Application
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 03:52 AM »
Hopeful Drylek, a very warm welcome around here. Make sure you stick around and show us your intrest just as we're going to do towards you.

As Knight Scalarik just pointed out, an expansion of your biography would give those who haven't seen you yet a better point of view and background information about you.

Non the less, best of luck and I hope to see you in our halls in some time. Thanks for your apply.

~ Master Valérii

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Re: Dreylek Application
« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2012, 03:10 AM »
Biography updatet, I hope this will do. ;) (( Was bored when server's are down ))

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Re: Dreylek Application
« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2012, 04:42 AM »
nice work on the bio , but i couldn't help but notice that according to your bio you are now  a jedi knight :P

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Re: Dreylek Application
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2012, 05:02 AM »
yeap :D it was hard to stop write xD maybe i saw future =))