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*<JO>* Haiku
« on: May 05, 2012, 12:32 PM »
Well, I've got a bit hooked up to the Total War: Shogun 2 (great,great,great game, recommend it to anybody), and it's got some strange haiku poetries on almost every loading screen, so I thought, hey, why not writing up haikus about us?

The rules of Haiku are easy to learn, lifetime to master:

1. There are three verses in the poetry, no metrics or rhymes are respected.
2. The two verses describe completely different pictures, but are complete in se.
3. The final verse adds the new meaning to previous two, and ties them together, and refers either to each of them, or to both together.

If you come up with yours, feel free to post them here!

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A jawa has found a pile of scrapmetal.
I walk down the road slowly.
Oh why, why did T7 wake me up so abruptly?

***

A cloud lays shadow over the pond.
The sound of lightsaber spreads over the water.
A new jedi is born.

***

A bird is flying up in the sky.
An old padawan falls on the ground.
Datacron hunting season is open.

E.h. Faria =)
« Last Edit: May 05, 2012, 12:33 PM by *<JO>*Elod-Hora Faria, J »
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