I've decided it's time to end this chapter of my life, and to do so I feel a story that ends the character is the best way to go. The story will be called "The Final Hour - The Death of Christopher Grim".
To fully have you understand the story I'll need to fill you in on the "Road to Redemption" story that I deleted. So, here's a synopsis.
Chris Grim comes back to the Jedi Temple to try and pick up the pieces of his old life. He's killed his Master (Mukhtar) and let go of the hatred for his father which leaves him to believe he can make it work. He is mistaken.
As he makes the transition back he finds that he cannot be a Jedi. His life has been filled with too much pain and hatred. He's watched his mother die, the girl he loves die, he's lost Myste/Nimora (his last true friend), he's been betrayed by two Masters and has killed his own brother. He can't be a Jedi and he knows it.
He makes the decision to leave after sparring with a youngling in the temple. He uses Grip on the youngling and nearly kills him. He understands now what Mukhtar told him before his death. He will never be able to be a Jedi again.
Before he can even pack a bag the Jedi Temple is attacked by a large group of Dark Jedi. They are untrained and lack in much skill. The Jedi defeat them with no trouble, it reminds Grim of raids he, Mukhtar, and Nimora used to do on Dark Jedi groups to thin out the competition.
They catch one alive and they demand answers, but the answers they get only serves to confuse and anger Grim. The Dark Jedi claims they came to sieze the mantel of Dark Lord from Chris.
He explains that by killing Lord Mukhtar, even as his last act as a Sith, was still an act of a Sith. He took the mantel from Mukhtar, and whether HE acknowledges it or not the Dark Jedi/Sith community acknowledges it. This will not be the last attack. Every Dark Jedi who wants to make a name for themself will be after Chris. They will kill a Jedi AND a Dark Lord in one strike with their saber.
Chris ignites his blade and cuts down the Dark Jedi and leaves the Temple deciding that he can't live in the Temple for a day longer. He can't risk anyone dying because of his past. So, he sets out into the galaxy looking to stay alive kill as many Dark Jedi as come his way.
That's the story. This new story will be the last. It'll take a while to write since I'm in the middle of writing a book, but it'll come up periodically. This thread will be used for the story discussion to save forum space. Stay tuned.
