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A Nightmare Realized
« on: August 02, 2007, 02:06 PM »
Starting the next story in the series.

We left off with Chris narrowly surviving a battle with three dark Jedi who had been sent by their Master to Endor to create an army to fight against the Jedi. This army consists of present and former Padawans sent to the enclave to become Guardians.

We now know that Chris is being watched by Mikeman Brizit and his Master, Vroxil who has foretold Chris' involvement in his army.

Why Christopher? What makes him so important?
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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 02:20 PM »
Chapter 1:

A large blue drape hangs from above a pair of large stone grey doors. The night sky rests on the drape reflecting the emblem imprinted on it. A Jedi symbol is etched in white, the wording underneath reads; ‘The Order of the Force’.

The drape doesn’t move in the calm night, acting as a portrayal of the temple it decorates. It’s a humid night at this temple, a neighboring village showing the distant memory of a sandstorm. The humidity is uncomfortable, feeling almost the same as if the sun were still raised in the sky but still the Jedi within the walls have managed to fall asleep.

Not everyone is asleep on this night. One man stands alone outside of the temple; sitting on the top of many steps is leading into the enclave.

His head in his hands, his blonde hair in between his fingers, he sits shaking on the steps, sobbing with his whole body. His blue eyes bloodshot from the crying the tears fall off his face hitting the ground like raindrops.

He slowly begins pulling himself together and rises to his feet, the sobs turn into a fit of laughter almost instantly. He un-hilts his saber from his belt and turns around facing the temple, his eyes fixated on the blue drape. The tears from his eyes seem to change from sadness to anger.

He mutters something under his breath and begins walking towards the stone doors, saber clenched in his hand. Pushing the doors open he walks down the Entrance Hall, the blue carpet under his feet leading his way towards the Main Hall.

The pillars around him begin to buckle as he walks past them; parts of the ceiling begin to collapse to the ground. The enclave begins to rumble and shake, but the man seems not to notice, or simply not to care.

The man stops for a minute to stare at the figure standing in front of the Main Hall doors. A cloaked figure standing in his way, saber drawn, ready to fight.

The man looks to the floor with a smile before looking back to the ominous figure in front of him. His eyes have changed from the blue they were to a sickening shade of yellow shaded with red.

Igniting his saber he begins into a dead run at the figure in front of the door. It ignites its long blue blade and prepares itself for the battle.

’I’ll kill you!’ the man screams as his saber comes down on the head of the figure.

Christopher Grim bolts up from his bed waking up in a cold sweat. He looks around his small room, his eyes adjusting to the darkness, the silhouettes of his desk comes into view.

He pulls his feet off his bed and stands slowly rubbing the sleep out of his eyes. This nightmare has consumed his life for the past week. Every night without fail he was back in front of the Order of the Force enclave, with the blonde Jedi.

He walks to his desk and turns on a small reading lamp sitting on it. He opens up a small diary that had been sitting closed on it.

The diary had been passed along to him from Knight Zunin after Padawan Asheron had given it to him. Asheron had received it from a man he could best describe as “tall and hooded”, which made many uneasy about giving Chris the book.

After much deliberation Knight Zunin decided not to look inside, feeling that the contents of the book were only meant for his Padawan, but, still the question of why it had been delivered at all remained.

The cover read “The diary of M.K.B”, the sides were tattered and the book looked worn. The pages were beginning to fade but the writing was still visible.

His life had revolved around this book, the tales of a female Jedi who’d lived in a enclave known as “The Order of the Force”.

Every attempt to research such a building had failed, but, there it was in his dreams every night. It was like the enclave never existed, like it was only a figment of his imagination. Yet, every morning when he woke from his nightmare he’d read about the women who had lived there.

Chris can't help but wonder what the dreams mean, but, knows who the man in them is. Not by name, but by description. He was, to the best of Chris’ knowledge, a Jedi Knight from the clan. The journal describes him as being a child in a mans body. Tall with blond hair, known as much for hsi ability for training some really talented saberists as his temper and knack for finding himself in dangerous situations.

The women wrote as if she sort of admired him for his bravery, but detested him for his lack of responsibility.

As many nightmares as this book seemed to be causing him, he still spend every moment outside of training reading the book. Every word, every letter, combing it for some detail that might say who the writer, the man, or anyone else was.

Why was he dreaming about this guy? Who was he? Who was the women? Where is this clan? All these questions swim inside of Chris' head as he turns to the entry dated the 15th day of the 1st month 14 years ago.

"One of our more talented Padawan's is being sent to an enclave on a distant planet. The Council has decided not to let anyone know which planet saying that he needs to train without interference from us.

He is such a talented child. He's been trained by some great Jedi Knights, including our best saberist so I know he will be great, but still I’m worried about him.

I don’t know if he is ready to be sent to another enclave just yet, so far away from his family and everyone he’s grown up with. He’s only 13-years-old and far from ready to take on the serious training of a school like this.

The Council on the other hand seems assured he will be fine, saying that he is going to be far ahead of anyone there.

I guess that eases my mind slightly, but, he is still so young. I hope he can handle the strain.”


Chris closes the book at the sound of a knock at his door. He stands and walks to the door opening it to find a tall man with white and silver hair looking down at him.

’Jedi Chris, Master Menelaos has asked me to come and get you. He wishes to see you in the Council Chambers.’
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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2007, 12:52 AM »
Chapter 2

Chris walks into the Council Chambers to find only Master Menelaos sitting alone. Chris is surprised to find no other Councilors in the room. He hesitantly walks deeper into the room. The door closes behind him startling him slightly. He is so used to facing the Council that being called to speak to only one had him a little on edge.

’You wished to see me Master?’

’Ah yes, good to see you Jedi Christopher.’ Master Menelaos looked more pleasant then he normally had when Chris has walking into the Council Chambers. He continued without hesitation, ‘I have something that I need to speak to you about.’

His hair standing on end, Chris said nothing but continued starring at the middle-aged man sitting in front of him (I’m trying to be nice).

’Christopher, it’s time you begin to learn a little bit more about what has been happening to you.’ Master Menelaos adjusts himself in his seat motioning for Chris to sit as well. ‘Alright, first let me start by saying that I have chosen to do this privately because of the nature of the conversation.’
’Over the last few years you have faced some big challenges. Your fight with Mikeman on Naboo, the dark Jedi on Endor. As much as we’d hoped that they were unrelated events, we cannot deny that they are related’

Chris continued to look at Menelaos confused, ‘Christopher,’ he began trying to find the right words. ‘The Council has come to realize that you are being hunted by a group of Jedi, and these Jedi are taking their orders from a former Jedi Master.’

Chris flinches at the sound of the word “Master”. A Master? After him? Why?

‘The Council does not know much about the men that have been hunting you—‘
’Mikeman and his Master.’
’Yes. His Master, Vroxil.’
’Who are they?’
’In there lies the problem. We don’t know much about who they are beyond the fact that they all at one point were members of the Jedi Order.’
’But--Why me?’

Master Menelaos’ face changes as he looks hard into Chris’ eyes.’ This is the reason for our meeting. Today we will be going on a mission to a Jedi enclave that’s records should be more complete then our own.’
’JO’s records are non-existent when it comes to—‘
’No, their is some information. Records on Mikeman, Vroxil, and their followers. The records were removed from our public Archives by the Council’
’Why?’ Chris says irritably.
’We—that is to say the Council—did not feel you were ready to hear about any of those topics until you were older. We know you well, Christopher, and believed you’d have done something--stupid. But, we also know that we cannot hold you from this information any longer as the danger to your life has become too great.’

Chris opened his mouth to speak but Menelaos stopped him with a simple wave of his hand. Questions kept racing through Chris’ head, leaving as fast as they came. ‘Why me? What did I do to them?’

’You’d better keep up, we’ll be leaving momentarily.’ Chris was shocked to see Menelaos had already stood and walked to the door, Chris stood out of his seat and exited the Council Chambers, retreating to his room to pack for the journey ahead.

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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2007, 12:53 AM »
Chapter 3

The flight is a long, quiet one. Every attempt for Chris to discover where they were going was thwarted by Master Menelaos’ silence. To Chris’ surprise Knight Zunin was not accompanying them on this mission.

Chris had taken the opportunity to catch up on his sleep, but was again unsuccessful. The nightmare kept coming back, so instead he went back to the diary reading more and more trying to find out the identity of the women who wrote it, with ever declining hope.

He flips the page to the entry from the 27th day of the 7th month 14-years ago.

”The Council has decided to give me forewarning that I will be trialed in the coming weeks. They believe me ready to become a Master. Considering that arrogant man made Jedi Master of the Council, I don’t disagree.

As luck should have it Master Nexus has offered to train me.

It’s taken me away from my husband as we train long hours, but I’m sure he’ll understand. He’s going to Endor to visit that Padawan I wrote about a few months ago. I wanted to go along but the journey is too long and it would disrupt my training.

Normally that wouldn’t be a problem, but, I’ve recently discovered that I am pregnant! So, my training will have to be halted soon while I am expecting child..

My husband is going to be so excited when I tell him!”


’Husband?’ thought Christopher as he combed the page again. Never before had there been a mention of a husband. He wondered what had become of the husband, the women herself.

The journal had been, for the most part, a pleasant read, but Chris begins to worry about their safety. Never one to pass a chance to be skeptical Chris wondered if the women were safe, then why did he get the journal?

Chris is pulled from his thoughts as the ship begins to shake furiously. Chris runs to the cockpit to see that the ship is descending on a planet.

The planet is pale, looks almost like it were deserted.

’Tatooine!’ Menelaos yells over the roar of the engines.

Chris had heard of this planet in legend, though he had never been there. It was the birthplace of Anakin Skywalker, which in itself gave Chris reason to cringe at the thought of landing on it.

The dust and sand billowed from under the ship as he made contact with the earth for the first time in days, though to Chris it seemed like weeks.
The ground buckles under the weight of the ship, and the engine begins to shut down. The hatch opens and a wave of sand rushes into the ship.

The sun is beating down on Chris’ face as he steps out of the ship and puts his cloak on. Shielding his face from the wind he looks around the desert that is Tatooine. Alone on the surface, far from any discernable city cits a large building.

Menelaos begins marching towards it as Chris hastily follows ascending the stone steps towards two large doors.

Chris’ eyes suddenly jerk as the movement of a drape wafting in the wind catches his eyes. He notices it immediately but cannot begin to understand what it means. As the drape unfolds to display the symbol etched on it Chris pauses, his mind racing.

’The Order of the Force… It’s real?’ The question, as absurd as it had seemed came out of his mouth so quickly he’d hardly realized who had asked it.

’That is right, Chris.’
’I don’t understand… I thought… I thought it was just a dream. A place written in a fictitious diary.’
’Fictitious? No Chris, the diary as well as this former enclave is legitimate.’

Before Chris can think he sees Menelaos continue to the top of the stairs. With one last look, he joins him, standing in front of two large stone doors. Looking at the door Chris realizes he cannot see a seam where the doors part. It has been sealed with concrete.

’A parting gift, I think,’ Menelaos says with a noticeable amount of distain in his voice.
’By who?’ Chris asks, not really needing to hear an answer. He knew it was the blond Jedi, as it had been in his dreams.

’Luckily there was an alternate entrance constructed after the enclave fell in order to excavate the bodies of the dead.’

Menelaos walks along the wall to a smaller door, seemingly carved in the wall, secured with a metallic door that had some sort of security device installed. Menelaos places his saber hilt in a hole in the device and it closes. The screen flashes the words “analyzing” before turning green and ejecting the saber hilt.

The sound of metal unlocking from behind the door is barely audible as the door swings open.

’Come, Christopher. There is much to see.’
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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #4 on: August 20, 2007, 12:54 AM »
Chapter 4

The main hall looks just like it had in Chris’ dreams. The blue carpet, faded and dirty leading the way from one door to another. Big slabs of concrete that had once made up the ceiling now lay on the floor.

Another large banner is descending from the wall just above the next set of giant doors, this one is ripped in half, with the bottom half laying crumpled on the floor. The rip looks clean, as if it were cut down.

The statues in the hall have been toppled, laying severed and destroyed like much else in the enclave. All the doors around him look to have been destroyed or welded shut. The remains of what used to be a training bot sits in two pieces, on the floor near what would most likely have been the training room.

The two ascend another staircase before turning towards a small door. It, like many of the others has been welded shut. But, Chris notices it doesn’t look like it was vandalized but rather…

’Locked down… The Jedi of this enclave didn’t want their attackers to destroy their archives it would seem,’ Menelaos says staring at the door with a satisfied grin.

”Exactly what they should have done,” Chris thinks staring at the door, looking for a way in.

There is another security panel sitting beside the door, but Menelaos doesn’t even look at it. He looks down at the confused Jedi standing to his left, ‘You try it.’

’Master?’
’Trust me. Place your hilt inside the security device.’

Chris does not attempt to question Menelaos and instead does as he is asked. He places his blade in the hole and it closes. The screen flashes for a moment before blue letters flash on the screen, “Approved: Christopher Grim”.

”How does it know who I am?” he wonders remembering the green letters Menelaos’ saber had produced on the security lock outside.

The door slides open with a distinctive hiss as Chris as Menelaos walk through the door. The room is massive, with green lights emanating from every shelf. The room, though dusty, looks undamaged. The blonde Jedi must never have made it in here after all Chris realizes.

They walk towards a computer sitting on a desk just a few feet from the door and sit beside one another. The screen in front of them is covered in a thick layer of dust that Chris whipes off with his sleeve.

The screen lights up, “Login and Password Please” flashes across the screen and Chris’ heart sinks for a moment. “Login? Password?” he thinks to himself.

Menelaos reaches to the computer and types in Christopher’s name into the login, ‘your password is “LHFTOF”, Christopher.’

’Which stands for?’

Menelaos looks at Chris with a smirk, but does not answer. He types in Vroxil and Mikemans names, suddenly files begin to pop up on the screen. Biographies, facts, Master/Padawan trees, everything Chris could have hoped for.

A young, blonde Jedi flashes on the screen catching Chris’ eye. It was him. The man in the diary, the man in the dreams… He was Vroxil?

’I… I don’t understand.’
’No? I thought it would be simple,’ Menelaos replies looking rather confused at Chris.

Chris looks back at the screen and begins combing through the files. Everything he had read about the blonde Jedi in the diary was coming up for Vroxil. “Talented saberist”…“Brash, arrogant, uncontrolled”… Every last word struck a cord with Chris. He stares into the eyes of the man in the picture, his eyes looks soft, trustworthy… How could this be the same guy who is trying to kill him?

Then, it catches Chris’ eyes.

”…father to Mikeman Brizit.” The words freeze Chris in his place. His eyes don’t move but his thoughts won’t stop. “Father?” They are related? The two after him, the men who haunt his dreams… are family?

”Husband to…” Menelaos turns off the screen and stands suddenly.

Chris’ eyes shoot up to Menelaos, ’I… I still don’t understand why they are after me.’

‘For that we must go to the Council Chambers.’

The walk to the Council Chambers is long, giving Chris a lot of time to digest what he had just read. Mikeman and Vroxil are related? Was Mikeman the little child who the diary spoke about?

It all began to make sense. Chris had heard rumors of a talented Jedi Guardian who had turned to the dark side while he had infiltrated the enclave on Endor. It was Mikeman.

Menelaos and Chris step into a lift and ascend towards the upper levels of the enclave.

But… if they were related, why wasn’t Mikeman with Vroxil when he attacked the enclave? And—what had happened to the women?

The door opens and Chris steps out behind Menelaos. They walks slowly to the Council Chamber doors. Menelaos stands back as Chris inserts his saber into the security system.

The door swings open and Chris enters. So lost in thought he hadn’t noticed the hooded figure sitting in the Council Chambers. Chris turns around to see the door close behind him and Menelaos’ eyes closed looking deeply regretful as he locks Chris in, all alone, with the hooded figure.
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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2007, 12:55 AM »
Chapter 5

Chris turns back to the hooded figure, his hands trembling slightly. His breathing is fast, his heart pounding. He takes off his own robes placing them on the floor.

A raspy voice fills the chambers sending a chill down Chris’ spine. ‘Are you ready to die, Jedi?’

These words seem to calm Chris. His breathing slows, his hands stop trembling.

He knows who it is he was looking at now. No mistaking it, the voice, the aura, it has to be Vroxil Brizit.

Nothing Chris could do would be good enough and he knew it. This man had once been a Jedi master known for his incredible saber fighting ability, and with the realization he was going to die filling him, he simply smirks.

‘Now is as good a day as any.’

He ignites his blade and prepares to battle, bushing a small clump of hair out of his eyes and taking a deep breath he looks death in the eyes.

After all he had been through, fighting Mikeman, the fallen Jedi, his trials and tribulation in the Jedi Order, this was how it was going to end. At the hands of a mass murderer.

He couldn’t help but feel slightly resentful towards Menelaos. A man he trusted had just sent him to his death. Was this for the good of the Order? Did Chris’ death mean Vroxil would stop killing?

Chris searches in vain for a single angry emotion, something that could give him a little extra power to fight, but instead all he can find is the realization he is about to die, and the acceptance of that certainty.

Without another thought he charges at the figure, saber dangling at his side.

The hooded figure raises only a hand and Chris is sent flying back into the chamber doors. With a thud he hits the floor again, his saber rolls across the floor, out of reach.

His head feels like it has split open, a ringing in his ears and the unmistakable feeling of inevitability wash over Chris.

The figure walks slowly to Chris, every step feeling like it takes an eternity. The figure stops in front of Chris and looks down at the Jedi who is barely able to lift his head.

’Take the hood off Brizit! Show me your face before you kill me like you had all the other Jedi in this enclave.’

The figure gasps slightly, ‘how do you know that name.’

’I know a lot of things you coward! They trusted you! You slaughtered an entire clan as they slept! SHOW YOURSELF!’

The figure takes a step backwards before beginning to melt before Chris’ eyes. He watches in shock as the once tall figure standing before him transforms into a smaller, more slender figure, a women. It had been a holographic cover all along, he had never been facing Vroxil.

Frustration washed over Chris. He’s going to die by this persons hands? “NO!” he screams in his head. He had made up his mind long ago that Vroxil would be the man to kill him, no one else.

’Who—‘

The women reaches for her hood and pulls it back, her long red hair falls down to her shoulders. Her blue eyes shine at Christopher, full of tears, but oddly she is smiling.

’MOM!?’

’Hello, dear.’
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Re: A Nightmare Realized
« Reply #6 on: August 20, 2007, 12:56 AM »
Chapter 6

’MOM?! You’re going to kill me?’

Megan Grim’s eyes close as a tear rolls down her face, ‘no honey, I am not going to kill you.’

’Then I don’t—‘
’Master Menelaos asked me to come speak with you. He says I am the only one who will be able to make you understand.’

Chris reaches for the back of his head checking for blood before finally trying to pull himself to his feet.

’Oh, I’m sorry I had to do that to you. I—wanted to make sure what I had heard was true.’
’What have you heard?’ Chris asks with a grunt as he finally stands up, his back cracking slightly.
’That you had become a brave Jedi… who can’t watch his temper,’ she says with a small smirk.
’Yeah… Yeah, that would be me in a nutshell,’ Chris says. He had always hoped she would hear better things about him, things that would make her proud.
’Please, let’s sit.’

The retreat to two chairs, the lights in the room brighten slightly and the fear finally washes off Chris.

’Mom, what’s going on?’
With a deep breath, Megan Grim struggles to find the right words. He had never known his mother to be short on words, so the sudden silence begins to scare Chris.
’Honey, you need to understand who it is that is coming after you, and what he has done.’
’I know, mom. He is Vroxil Brizit, a former Master… The destroyer of this enclave.’

’No son, he is so much more then that.’

Before she can continue, something sparks in Chris’ mind. In all the commotion he had nearly forgotten, ‘you used Force Push on me…’

’Yes, I did.’
’You are a Jedi?’
’Was a Jedi,’ she snaps slightly causing Chris to jump.
’But…’

Her eyes drop to the ground, before raising back to her son, ‘I was once a member of the Jedi Order. I was once a member of this enclave, as you would have been.’
’What?’
’That is why you have been given full access. Even though you were not born at the time the enclave fell, you would have been a member of the Order of the Force.’
’What happened?’
’Vroxil happened. One night he assaulted the enclave, killing almost everyone, but you and I. Though, that was not his intent.’
’You mean…?’
’He wanted to kill me, yes. He didn’t yet know I was pregnant, but his goal was to kill everyone. I was lucky to escape with my life and flee the planet.’

Chris’ expression of bewilderment dropped to one of utter frustration and anger. It all made sense. Vroxil was after him to finish the job he had started 14-years ago…

’14-years?’ Chris mumbles before reaching into his tunic and pulling out the old diary.

‘You have my diary?’
’Yes, someone gave it to me. Wait, your diary?’
’Vroxil has been into JO’s enclave?’
’What? I… but,’

Megan stands furiously, muttering a stream of obscenities under her breath before turning back to her son, ‘he’s gone too far.’

’I don’t… How is this your...’
’Christopher, you must listen! Vroxil is in this to win. He doesn’t like to lose. You’ll either join him or die by his hands,’ her voice shakes as she finishes the sentence.
’If he wants to kill me, let him try.’
’Exactly what your father would have said.’
’Really? But—dad always told me not to use violence.’

Megan’s demeanor changes once again, as the tears flood her eyes again, ‘Christopher, there is something else you and I need to discuss.’

The door to the chambers hiss open as Menelaos is thrown into the room, landing hard on the floor. Two figures enter the room and de-cloak.

The blonde haired Jedi stands in the entrance of the chambers, his son standing beside him.

’Mikeman… Vroxil!’ Chris says, his anger building. How dare they return after what they had done!

’Yes, Megan… There is much to discuss, isn’t there?’ Vroxil said with a twitch of his lip and a slight cackle.

TO BE CONTINUED
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