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Endless Night(chat!)
« on: July 26, 2007, 10:34 PM »
I am making a new story. Not going to tell you what's it is about, but no doubt you guys will get it when I post the first chapter!

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2007, 12:59 AM »
BRILLIANT! GENIUS!...Your captivating postmodernistic prose and neodemonstrative story-structure is utterly fascinating at least!

I don't care if you're tough...I have a drink and a blaster, one of which is going to be used; which one depends on you.

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2007, 03:38 AM »
I bet it will be great

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2007, 04:02 AM »
BRILLIANT! GENIUS!...Your captivating postmodernistic prose and neodemonstrative story-structure is utterly fascinating at least!

he hasn't even begun the story yet >.>

Cant wait for the story jedi barrow =D

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2007, 04:11 AM »
I think he was joking Padawan Vargus ::)

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2007, 05:12 AM »
Did he ???

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2007, 10:26 AM »
Putting up the first chapter after work today

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2007, 02:57 PM »
Will it be better than Shawn of the Dead?

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2007, 08:35 PM »
Meh I'll have to find good places to put comedy lol

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2007, 09:17 PM »
It was fantasticular
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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #10 on: July 28, 2007, 12:55 AM »
Great! I am not a pro in writing or so but I read a lot I like you story a good begining with the thunder and the scary padawans! :D I can't wait for more :D

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2007, 09:02 PM »
Anymore comments on the first chapter?

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2007, 04:46 AM »
Ahh!! Vampires in Star Wars!!

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2007, 05:12 AM »
:o thats one heck of a beginning Jedi Barrow, quite the struggle going on in the medical lab.

Another one of the few stories that really grasped me =D the way everything has just played out and 'Giz' doesn't know what has happened to the two people in the medical room has really caught my attention :)

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

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Re: Endless Night(chat!)
« Reply #14 on: August 17, 2007, 02:23 AM »
Very very good