Topic: A beginning

[Nejj Evnairis]

 This will be a mini RP text, and written work in progress to practice my writing skills, and diction skills. kind of like living history some may say "isn't that presumptuous?" Just something I think will be fun, and being leader of RP I need to start doing instead of preaching.

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1st Post----- Table of Contents
2nd Post----Chapter 1 (violent description)
3rd post ---- Chapter 2 (app)
4th post----- Chapter 3 coming soon

[Nejj Evnairis]

    In the village of the Hyrian clan Adan was apart of Adan was sleeping on his cot he lived in one of the more primitive villages outside of the major city Súrion, named after an infamous Hyrian.

  *Thinking* I was sleeping, the smell of the sweet breeze through the nectar filled forest, fromthe Pinceloth trees kept me grounded in the realm of the living. Keeping my dreams vitiated I remember feeling uneasy, but my thoughts lay on my father's on a trip to investigate a village to the south who had reported strange humanoid type creatures, wearing strange armor. My mother that night..... I cannot recall....*Starts to drift into a trance of third person state reflecting on the past like a mirror.*

     
    Adalync Kinae (My true name my Hyrian name) lay there in his bed in his breeze filled room the temperature cool, and calming. Feeling the breeze wip his forehead playing with his amber hair. Toying with his thoughts carrying the sweet smell of the luscious nectar, his body as nomadic as his mind he doesn't know it yet, his destiny is greater, and it is about to get flipped upside down. In the village of Felagund the village is calm, unknowing, and ignorant to the trouble above. The unease of his mind did not train on what was truly bugging Adalync Kinae. The town of Felagund, was in rest except some of the women including Adalync's Mother were guarding the town, the night lay cool, but the women's ceremonial armor was like wearing the wool of a bantha on a tatooine summer day, not even the constant breeze could cool them.
   A quick snap, flash fizz happened in front of Celebriän, a agile, and balanced women covered her eyes, for her eyes to only focus on the butt of a blaster rifle,breaking  her nose shoving it screaming, intrusively into her brain killing her instantly. Ela (Adalync's Mother) snapped her head to the left the only two guards on the north end of the town, seeing her dear friend, and comrade fall spouting blood everywhere the moon's light catching every shimmer of blood, and myst from the gash spouting like a fountain. When Ela turned around she was pinned down by a net, feeling piercing objects ravage her left leg, and right shoulder, her shoulder separated with a sharp metal object tearing through the muscle like a rusted knife cutting leather straps, and nothing but the force of the projectile allowed it to pin through her arm. Crazing with pain Ela rips out the durasteel barbed projectile, cutting her elegant fingers  on the projectile, she hears explosions, and laser fire occur throughout the village, the second of distract ended Ela's pain with a quick *swizzle* of energy , and nothing but a bright green light appeared.
 
     Back in Adalync's room he jumps up feeling the sense of despair and urgency creeping through his mind, and wrangling over his body, as if he lost his dearest possession. Even at the age of 6 his reflexes were astounding, his mind tickled with more exigency, and wrapped around the target flying toward his window, the plasteel starting to bend as his mind watched an orange cloud, with black cracks, and grey bubbles expanding through the plasteel, it started to break through, and it eventually engulfed the room, Aranel felt the singing of hairs on his neck as he pushed with extraordinary strength through the door.
 
   Adalync now faced two men both holding stun batons, wearing dark armor with weird lights for eyes, again with quick reflexes, he scared the two men approaching them with great speed, and intensity spreading toward them, the footman on the right froze as the other tried to swing back, Adalync grabbed the baton from the footman on the right with ease leaving the man in a blinking astonishment, Adalync completely blacked out with a glazed look thrust the baton into the gut of the footman in action, and shocking the stomach of the soldier the crackling, and singing smell woke Adalync from his gaze for a second the soldier from the attack starting to puke from the sheer force of Adalync's agility, and strength the vomit dripping out the helmet like a kinked hose. The other soldier  gaining momentum to attack didnt even feel the cracking of the baton against his helm till the electric shock knocked out his sensors,  Adalync with repeated bashing against the helm knocked the soldier out from the shock, and repeated jarring motion received from the blows.
   Adalync woke up from his blackout dropping the baton with fear smelling vomit, blood and
  ran outside to see the what was going on, some hyrians being executed others being herded like Draagax into lift cages with bright lit flying machines, then all of a sudden shock intensity, and a swift pain overcame Adalync's head, and everything became black.

   Slipping in and out of consciousness on a ship in a containment field with a female hyrian, and a male hyrian, and 2 other Hyrians in robes huddled in the corner of their containment cell's. I heard the women's voice her name was Erosian Gindelar she was so elegant, she whisperd my name I could recognize her just by her voice, she used to visit my parents home "Adalync....Adalync!" ...a depressing pause "Adalync Kinae, wake up, do not forget Adalync." slipping in and out of consciousness throughout the journey on the trip I woke not knowing the three other passengers, I asked where Erosian was, but noone answered, I saw the saddened look on a mans face, and I asked "What happened to Ms. Gindelar?" the man replied "She was Sold", and the man started to weep bitter tears. I thought to myself... Sold! we cant be sold no living creature that can walk, and think can be sold like vermin! Anger coiled up in me, and I started to scheme, saving my energy and rationing the food given to make sure I would not be so hungry. I was planning on escaping so I could find out what happened to my parents, and better yet not be sold into captivity.

  The guard was sharp, but he seemed to be like the previous guards i vaguely remember dismantling. The memory of vomit, and singed skin, and armor pawing my nose hairs as if permanently not letting me forget about the actions I took upon myself what seemed weeks ago. With my strength weakening what it was, it was like they intentionally would feed us enough to survive, but enough to not fight back. I lay asleep on the ground, or at least that is the image I wanted to project to everyone in the room, I noted where the guard held his stun baton, and normally he would not bring in his rifle, when he dropped the force cage, I quickly snapped up trying to reach for his baton, but because of the fatigue I was under, the trooper drew the weapon with grace, and agility, twirling it in his hand, and winding back making sure he had a full swing to my body, and whaled on my torso one hit almost breaking my ribs, the shock of the electric crippling me to the ground, and forcing me to drop in agony, the second was right in the back of the head.....That all too familiar feeling of shock, and heavy feeling swarmed over my body, and the next thing I remember I was standing in front of a foreign giant slug, as big as 5 hyrians.



( some may argue that a 6 year old could not do such things, but it has been noted in some cases with some force users, that they can tap into the force to aid them when scared or blacked out.)

[Nejj Evnairis]

Adan Xemo was a young boy from Hyria actualy he was practically still a baby at the age of  age of 6  his encampment was raided by Space Pirates, these pirates captured Adan in his town. These pirates captured children, and some women, while the men were out gathering supplies, and killed or captured the guards of the town, all along not knowing of what happened to my parents. Loitering on the Outer Rim, Adan was slowly malnourished, and finally brought to Ylesia while he still held some worth, where I was sold to Kossak a terrible hutt(dialogue)

Kossak: Achuta Carn Che copah Bu Bukee est de Ootmian poodoo
Pirate Leader(Carn): Because you see this boy, nothing like you have seen, he will grow to be twice as strong, it is a wise investment.
Kossak: Bu Booki bu Che copah Che Nobata rupee Huntomon
Pirate Leader(Carn): Ok Kossak you drive a hard bargain, how about 900 credits, and I will throw in this Female too.
Kossak: *Chuckles in a rumbling roar" Ting cooing koo soo ah.
(paying no mind after seeing the beautiful female Hyrian)
Pirate Leader(carn): Well You gorgeous creature?
Kossak:*chuckles*Batha ne Nal Hutta  Mee jewz ku
 of, Later Aerex Xemo, and Ibis Xemo fellow slaves of Kossak offered to care for me(Dialogue)

Aerex Xemo: Master Kossak
Kossak:Tagwa Sleemo?!
Aerex Xemo: Sorry to disturb you Master, the boy he looks unwell, can I..*interupted*
Kossak: Hi chuba da naga?
Aerex Xemo: I would like to take care of the boy
Kossak: Bu Booki Tah-koh tee quenker e’nachu
Ibis Xemo: Nooooooooooo!
Aerex Xemo: Stay out of this darli.....
Kosak *peers at Aerex then peers at Ibis*: Koochoo*chuckles* Kee baatu baatu.Wa wanna coe moulee rah? Stoopa
Aerex Xemo *bows*: Thank you Master.
Kossak grabbed me and threw me into Ibis' direction.

 so I would be of use since I was malnourished, and weak. They took care of me, and because I couldnt properly say my name in Hyrian They named me Adan Xemo my primary job was to help clean, and keep order around the kitchen of the Hutt's Mansion this work continued on for a year, with Aerex, and Ibis becomming more like family, with incidence's occuring that were not natural for a 6 year old boy, such as quick reflexes dodging bumpling oafs, or dodging mean drunks punchs from drunk bothans, or crude pirates.(Jumping forward a couple years)
     
    Adan Xemo was flown to Coruscant with a Traveler from Ylesia a merchant/ Smuggler on business since his parents were slaves they couldn’t afford to pay a ticket for just one of them to go plus it is easier to sneak a child out of slavery than it is all three family members without fear of punishment or death.
The reason for fleeing Ylesia was because young Adan was showing skills of unnatural ability, having unseen details of occurring events, his parents recall an event recalled from the datapad (one of the rare nice belongings that Adans parents acquired by either gathering off of a drunks table or repairing a busted datapad.) “Was when Adan was playing with some friends, and one of his friends got mad after he won a game of hand slap (a primitive game yet having high-reflexes allowed Adan to win) as Adan was walking away his friend in anger threw a shattered piece of a power coupling laying on the ground next to a speeder, a normal boy would have been seriously injured, but at age 7 Adan picked up a light Dura-steel pipe and smacked the piece away with amazing reflexes, and even more insight, not even realizing what he did himself, he dropped the pipe and ran to us.” (us being his parents)
     This amongst other events Adan’s parents Heard of the Jedi Order forming on Coruscant, they thought if he is truly  has potential of being a Jedi it is a much better life than to be enslaved for the rest of his life wanting something better Aerex Xemo, and Ibis Xemo started to try and materialize someone to help them.

(Dialogue overheard by Adan)Pressing my body against the wall to the kitchen I listened

Aerex Xemo: Something is peculiar about this boy *a quizical look is upon his face*
Ibis Xemo: Interesting enough he is, I wonder where he is from, and that dancer that was sold          around the same time? are they all like this?
(A thought by Adan: Am I different?)
Aerex Xemo: I dont think so, that Bothan went whailing on people, and she got hit the worst with its legs, poor adan he almost got hit too, but...
Ibis Xemo *now looking at him*: He dodged it in way more advance than we could have anticipated for. That leg would have crushed him.
Aerex Xemo: This is too much how are we going to get him out of here, we don't eve...
Ibis Xemo: What.... how do we even know he is possibly the makings of a jedi?
Aerex Xemo: We only knew from old stories, and that there is a place for people with talents on Coruscant much lik e what our bo.....
Ibis Xemo *starts crying*: Yes I do too, I view him as my son its ok Aerex, it is ok to be attached though it only has been a couple years we love this boy, we will start scraping money out of what we earn, and we will get Blair to pick pocket some funds for us Blair always looks after Adan for us he is like a brother to him.
Aerex Xemo *Grabs a Linen cloth and offers it to Ibis*: He is special we cannot ignore this, he has grown even in the year we have watched him, but I wouldnt say Blair is the all great role model for Adan, I mean the guy is more nasty than Kossaks drool.*Aerex Cringes at the though almost gagging at the slimy green salvate*
Ibis Xemo: Now who are we going to ger to help us, not many of Kossaks employee's will help especially if it is bad for business, and smuggeling slaves is as bad as it can get.
Aerex Xemo: What about Booster Gerek? He is Correllian they have had....
Ibis Xemo: *Groans louder than a wompa in rage* "Not him anyone but him ahhh tell me another one"
Aerex Xemo *ponders*: Listen he is our only chance, he is skilled he is correlian, they hate being enslaved, or oppresed more than anyone, they always have had a free spirit.
Ibis Xemo: Allllright (with a long sigh) the next time I am waiting tables in the Palace, I will try and get in contact.
Aerex Xemo: I know you had it in you babe, would you like some caf?
Ibis Xemo: always trying to keep me up at night?
Aerex Xemo: Ibis I would never (with a sure grin on his face)
(Adan: falling asleep he slumps over closer to the door triggering it to open)
Aerex Xemo: ahh that crafty little kid, I swear he is so nimble if we didnt have auto triggers he could sneak himself out. *chuckling*
Ibis Xemo: Dont suggest that he may be listening he doesnt need that encouragement...
Aerex Xemo: Yes mother...
(The Xemo family retires)

        Upon reaching Coruscant, Adan was exactly 7 galactic years, he remembers his parents telling him (remember dialogue) "We are going to help better your life Adan, becuase we love you, very much"~ Aerex, and Ibis Xemo
   (In Kossak Hutt's Palace)

  Ibis Xemo *waiting on tables* *see the dark man dressed in grey, and reds with some curious green goggles, and spikey reddish brown hair*(mumbling): Man I wish for once he would dress more subtley.*Walks over to the Spikey haired man*
*Booster looks up*Gerek: ahhh hey Ibis looking as exsquisite as ever, I see Aerex left ya.
Ibis Xemo(almost snapping): No he wouldnt leave me to you, remember he likes me.
Booster: *laughing obnoxiously* Or so he says ibis, (Booster allof a sudden calms over) This isnt like you ibis, why havent you already taken my order and threw my first drink in my face....?
Ibis Xemo: Well.....todays a special day where friends...
Booster: Cut the Fodder Ibis, what is going on?
Ibis Xemo: Aerex, and I have a favor....It has to do with Adan....
Booster: Great...I can already see where this is going, *peering around for close persons* You know this will cost you....
Ibis Xemo: WE know we have it mostly covered, how about we talk about this in our apartment?
Booster: I would prefer that much better than this rancor pit, your boss and my employer over than wouldnt take kindly to missing persons.
Ibis Xemo: come sometime in the evening, ill get you the usual Valarsian Brandy.

 Being bright for his age Adan's parents Aerex Xemo, and Ibis Xemo trusted him with their words of advice. They met the merchant dealing with their master that night; Booster Gerek a Correlian Smuggler much like the infamous Han Solo, playing on the Correlian spirit Aerex, and Ibis told the smuggler about their child.(Yes...mor Dialogue)

 Aerex Xemo: Ahh good to see you Booster.
 Booster Gerek: Way to tease me with your wife earlier old friend.
 Ibis Xemo: Though he got caught *murmurs* Doesnt mean he is dumb *she teaseingly rubs his shoulder*
 Aerex Xemo: ok lets get to business before Blair and Adan show up.
 Ibis Xemo: We think that Adan...
 Booster: is going to die and needs the best medical attention?
 Aerex: Stop joking you clown  *playful yet punishingly punches booster's arm*
 *Booster caught off guard kinda laughs then rubs his arm*
  Booster: Ok so what is going on with your boy
  Aerex: We think that he can possibly be a jedi *hands Booster the datapad they stole*
  Ibis: These are the details we have so far on him being able to react either far more in advance or even. the most recent incident with his friends.
  Aerex: I think that it is imperative that things stay quiet, we will pay half now, and half will be wired once you finish the job, with a picture of you dropping him off.
   Ibis: We trust you, but our love, and concern for Adan's wellbeing tips the scales in his favor.
   Booster: of course, so what? you want me to take him to the Jedi Order on Coruscant? betray my employer so I can either end up dead, owe him money, or a slave?
    Ibis and Aerex Xemo (simotaniously): Yes.....
    Booster: Well this is going to be a pretty pricey job, I mean no one is freeing the boy. And I have to risk my ship...
    (interuppting) Aerex Xemo: You risk yoru ship for the slug spit boss of ours every galactic year!
    Booster: Still this is all loss, and favors are not cheap.
    Booster: 10 thousand credits. and that is being generous.
    Aerex Xemo: What!? that is outrageous!
    (ibis tried to hide her smile Adan was great at bluffing, blair gatherd that much within the first few months skimming tables for tips, and robbing high rises in the city this meant they had some left over)
    Booster: that is a fair price for the tragedy I have to go...
    Aerex: Stop being a queen *grumbling*  well pay
    Ibis Xemo: *chuckling at the queen comment* We have our funds on there way right now.
    (Right as she spoke those words)
    Blair a thin tan rugged late teenage boy, with leather and linen leggings, and a linen t-shirt walked in with me Adan. We saw a man with green goggles and spikey hair
Remembering my Parents words they said "The time has come", Blair pulled out a linen and leather bag with fine embrodery holding some credit chips, My dad( Aerex)
 Aerex: Nice bag you lift that too?
 Blair: yeah just lik your datapad *juggles the datapd*
 Ibis' laughing
 Aerex glaring: Hey give that back, your such a clown, anyway here it is 5 thousand, when do you want to do this?
  Booster *looks at the bag wanting to count*: Well lets say I will take him in an hour it will be nightfall and easier to sneak him around and out.....
   Booster looked at me and said "Looks like we are travel buddies partner"

  Saddened but ready we left I said goodbye to my family, and we snuck out into the night,(More Dialogue)

Adan Xemo: I love you mom..dad
Aerex: We love you too son, you have made us very proud. (holding back the tears)
Ibis: I love you ady, please be careful, we love you very much, Booster WILL take care of you, I love you honey(giving Adan one last hug)
Blair: Take care kiddo, maybe we'll see you around
Ada Xemo: I love you guys I wont let you down.
 we made it to his ship no problem, I remember he rarely spoke to me.
 Booster not liking the idea of anyone in captivity he offered to help. Aerex, and Ibis payed the smuggler after Booster accepted the task he thought it to be trouble since they were slaves’ to a Hutt and not just any old Hutt but a Hutt named by Kossak (after the legendary Hutt) a vicious ruthless Hutt so he acted to take no interest in the boy and put on the façade of (the all to familiar innocent look still recreated in Holo-dramas of actors portraying Han), a typical smuggler attitude and also wanting to keep the Hutt apart of his profitable business he did not need to cross such notoriously bad natured creatures.
     The traveler held up his end of the deal not partaking in too much conversation or interest in the kid, just telling the Learner Favian on duty at the temple that his parents paid him to deliver this youngling. Watching the dispute between the padawan  and Booster I thought to myself (that this is it)
    Learner FaVian: You cannot just drop off a boy saying that he is possibly force sensative.
    Booster: Will you please just take him, I need to drop him off if my employer finds out, I have already spoken to much, just please....
   (Learner Favian looking at Adan, and Adan looking back at him)
  Feeling a tickle in the back of my head as he approached), the padawan turned and looked at the Grand Being walking toward me, and his features looked particularly familiar, his name was Master Farore
Master Farore: It is ok my padawan we can take him, something is intruiging about him.
Learner Favian: Yes Master
Booster: oh thank goodness, take care jedi I must be on my way.

 Master Kaeawc, and Learner Favian nodded to Booster. I thought about my family(Aerex, and Ibis Xemo), my mother, and my father with sharp rough features, and my mother as elegant as a Kaminoan in movement, or so my father said. (Before Booster left me at the temple he told me that my parents loved me very much.) This is where my start began.