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Short story of Naiqwan
« on: January 24, 2012, 12:44 PM »
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Name: Naiqwan Kaldora
Age: 24
Species: Zabrak
Alignment: Dark
Short bio: Born and raised on his home planet of Iridonia, Naiqwan was destined to become a powerful jedi knight. He showed signs of using the force through his childhood and was undoubtably growing in both strength and in power year by year. When Naiqwan was of age, he was recognised and immediatley recruited into the jedi academy, forcing him to leave his family behind which was unbearable. However, Naiqwan soon came round and had realised that the academy needed him inorder to gain an advantage over the empire. In roughly 4 months of training, Naiqwan was showing signs of incredible strength and power and was ready to take the test before becoming a jedi knight. This was rare and not frequently heard of in history of the jedi, and the council, housing the most powerful masters in the galaxy, were beginning to feel uneasy about Naiqwan's capabilities. Tomius Nu'vada, another padawan, trained alongside Naiqwan and they both grew to like one another. However, it seemed they both had different views on the jedi code. Tomius was extremely loyal and obeyed its strict orders with pride. Naiqwan wanted to go above and beyond the rules of the code and was seeking more power whilst expressing his true emotions for certain individuals. But he did remain loyal to the code, and although he didn't obey every rule, masters thought he would be a good asset to have and could see that his actions were not threatening to the order.
After days of discussing, the council came to a decision and decided that it would be best if Naiqwan didn't take the test and carried on with training to ensure that he was fully ready. Wise, although it seems that their judgement was clouded and this lead to Naiqwan's first encounter of arrogance.
Naiqwan  was now growing stronger daily, and was interested in learning aspects of the dark side of the force, although remaining dedicated and loyal to the jedi. As years past Naiqwan grew even more arrogant and was no longer afraid of breaking the jedi code. He had slayed several powerful sith in terrifying speeds and in a mannor that conflicted with the jedi way.
This was the first step of Naiqwan potentially becoming a powerful jedi, and masters alongside sith lords were quick to underestimate his power.
All that remains is the chance for Naiqwan to undergo the test of becoming a knight of the old republic and being a great addition to the jedi order...
« Last Edit: January 28, 2012, 07:24 AM by *<JO>*Naiqwan Kaldora,P »