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Offline Jaden

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #15 on: May 23, 2007, 08:52 AM »
I have :)

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #16 on: May 23, 2007, 12:05 PM »
das ist gut
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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #17 on: May 23, 2007, 12:11 PM »
Excuse me? what did you call me!?!  ;)

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #18 on: July 04, 2007, 11:23 PM »
I enjoy any feedback available.  If anyone has any reactions or thoughts, please share.

I don't care if you're tough...I have a drink and a blaster, one of which is going to be used; which one depends on you.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #19 on: July 04, 2007, 11:52 PM »
Great as usual, I am totally digging it keep up the good work.
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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #20 on: July 05, 2007, 02:33 AM »
Printed it out again and going to read it before I fall in a deep deep dream ^^ Keep up the good work !

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #21 on: July 05, 2007, 10:45 AM »
AWESOME!

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #22 on: July 25, 2007, 03:01 AM »
It's been a while, I know, but I'm still going to finish these.

I practically rewrote most of the chapter when Jack wakes up in the cell, so go ahead and read that if you want to follow along with the plot...it's a large change that moves the story forward a bit.

I'll also be adding a new chapter immediately after this post.

I don't care if you're tough...I have a drink and a blaster, one of which is going to be used; which one depends on you.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #23 on: July 25, 2007, 03:08 AM »
OK, looking forward to it. Going to read all again when I return from holiday ^^ Then I have something to wait for !

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #24 on: July 30, 2007, 04:23 PM »
:D I can see what's coming... I think.  Nice plot though, good foreshadowing.

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Re: Discussion: C-PI stories
« Reply #25 on: July 30, 2007, 07:11 PM »
The last few chapters were getting sporadic and too emotional, I thought, and that's just not Jack.  But thankfully it will actually fit in nicely later when-...well, you'll see.

The whole point of this story is to see how quickly Jack gets pulled into everything, almost completely out of his control, and how the events of the first C-PI story were only the beginning.

I don't care if you're tough...I have a drink and a blaster, one of which is going to be used; which one depends on you.