Probably won't be everybodies cup of tea, but I know I won't please everyone. I think the twists are going well. The next story (Part 2 of this) will be the last plot driving one until I've become a Knight (can't have Chris kill his enemies when he's 13, lol) but I'll probably have a few character advancing ones.
This one is my favourite, not just because of the information it gives the reader, but also because of what it leads into (part 2). The next one will be really good, and we may see a Vroxil/Megan or Chris fight, I haven't decided.
Anyways, here is a 6-Chapter part 1. Enjoy.
